OK I have your rewritten essays and will mark them for next week. Your assignment for next week is to write a thesis statement for your new persuasion paper and convert the thesis statement into the title of your paper and then condense it into the first or topic sentence of the first paragraph of your paper which you should also write (type). So thesis statement and first paragraph all laid out correctly as if it was the first page of your new paper. Think about it and stay within the suggested categories and do some research on quotable reference material. Good luck. See you next week. ;>}